they move a bit fast for my liking (though i have read hat before) but since they are boys and have 'a lot' on their minds i understand besides it was really funny

*eyes widens* He didn't? *LOL* Naughty boy indeed! And now Oliver's stunt gave my Atemu/Yami, Bakura and Marik muses evil ideas! *points to the 3 mischivious yamis as they huddle in the corner plotting*

Strange plan indeed...that was really funny nonetheless!

*LMAO* Naughty Naughty boy

that was hilarious! you are a great fan fic writer! i hope you do more with Oliver!

hmmmmm. nice idea, dialogue and plot, and i like the interaction between the two. my fave slash couple in HP :) the 'surreal dream' thing and the 'there are no wings' bit was great. however, there are a lot of grammatical errors, and would have therefore benefitted from a beta. apart from that, nice :)

Oh my! lol! This was great! Great idea hehe

That was great! feathers...hmm...;P