I love it. I find Takumi x Ryosuke to be awesome. Please continue...it's very entertaining so far!

I also really like this story and the plot. Hope you'll be updating soon!

Wa~~ Reading this story made me feel like squealing, jumping about and somersaulting in the air... >.<

The prolouge's great! Although, I thought that Takumi was 18 at the start of the series?

Update son! PLEASE! =D

I love this story.I really hope you update soon.

Great story

Okay, so this is not in any way like the actual canon? As in, here Takumi is 16 and not 18. And it's funny you called Keisuke and Ryousuke "men", because they are only a few years older than Takumi, unless that has been changed as well. I believe at the start of the series Keisuke was 21 and Ryousuke 23? Something like that, so if Takumi is 13, they should be 16 and 18...
Anyways, wish to see where you'll take this. ^^

AWESOME. I totally love this one.

PLEASE PLEASE update soon, ne. ^_^