haha, Edward... :D

I really enjoyed it

A great story. Very well written.

Really liked that. Cute and funny. Sneaky Edward.

Oh this just made my workday so much more enjoyable

That's hilarious too! Loved it! and now im adding you to my fav authors!

LOL wow I love you little Nessie one-shots, their so funny!

Cuute!

Wait, I can tell, by the ending... Is going to be an Edward one? *O*

cute funny hilarious and every other word meaning good in the endlessly long engilsh dictionary

OMG. XD

*hyperventilating*

hahaha, i love this :) its really good :)

How is he gonna punch in a vampire's face?

Oh well, doesn't matter, i guess if he wants to meet Bella's temper-punch face it's his hand.

I laughed the whole time!

haha! thats funny and cute! :D

Hahahahaha I LOVE its hilarious ! I have always wondered what Nessie would think about Jake and Bella lol now I know lol :)

hahahaha that was awesome :)

this awesome!

just one question, how old is nessie, in how old she looks and how old she really is in human years?

cause shes calling her parents mommy and daddy but she also called jacob her boyfriend and she also called him icky lol

it was hilarious!