I do like your stories, despite the evilness and dark side of them... but that trainer was just plain evil. Bastard.

EVIL SO FUK YOU!

sick and twisted.

OMG HE KILLED THE CHARMELEON everyone knows if a Charmeleon's tailflame goes out he DIES!

You stupid mother fucking SON OF A BITCH how could you not know that you stupid, SENSELESS trainer?

Good story! I feel it was a bit short, but otherwise this fic was well worth reading.

I've actually been reading your fics for years now, and I must say that they never disappoint me. I like that you indulge in dark material, for it makes the characters and situations more believable. Yeah, it's true that Pokemon is a light-hearted anime, but it cannot be denied that some trainers are callous; it would simply be illogical to assume that all trainers are compassionate.

That said, I enjoyed this. It made me think.

I was right. You freaking murderer of pokemon. I hate that trainer.

again with the ash bashing!

That's just EVIL. You ARE sick and twisted.

What trainer is that stupid, I mean, three years of being a trainer, and no understanding of type advantages? And he killed his Charmeleon? Which survived to live on and get revenge during the revolution?

Some people would do that. And I'd like to know something about you critics.

HOW BLOODY OLD ARE YOU?

This is well written, though. And to all of you out there who think Farla 'needs help'...

If Farla likes to write stories of this type, then SHE CAN WRITE THEM.

I have come to the conclusion that critics that say 'oh no Farla roet anoter ANGSTI storie Farla neads hepl' or 'omg yuo aboose caracters YOU SUXOR!1!'...

You are childish and DUMB. And honestly, I don't CARE if you start trying to attack me.

To Farla:

This was extremely well written, albeit a bit short. But some people would do that in real life. They WOULD. Just because some people(aka critics) wouldn't, some would.

But this was a beautifully done story.

Cacaruka :3

Wow, extremely short and violent story. Why would you do something like that? Just because he didn't obey the guy?

Wow, I'm glad Pokemon aren't real, just because I know that your story would most likely come true.

I wasn't sure what to think of this at first, but it's actually very good. You've brought out characteristics that define the pokemon and trainer, even though the story is only a few paragraphs long. Very dark, well written and giving an interesting perspective on both the pokemon and on people.

Kudos! _

After reading the reviews for this story and few others of yours I have come to one conclusion. We are surrounded by juvenile morons.

Oh yeah... damned good story too!

really nice, I like!

Hey, a muffin!

dumb trainer. i happen to like fire pokemon. ok, maybe charmeleon isn't my fav. pokemon, but i like his evolution, charzard.

Geez, there should be some sort of RSPCA for pokemon, huh? But then again that would mean no more of these fanfics...