good fic!

Me and Cell(reading this chapie)

Me: "Heh"

Cell: "Hmm"

Me and Cell(burst out laughing)

Me: "AHAHAHAHAHAH"

Cell: "HAHAHAHAA"

Me: "HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!"

Me: "YAY! It's HERE!

Cell: "What is here?"

Me: "THE SECOND CHAPIE! YAY!"

Cell: "Mental note: keep coffee away from her."

Me: "Cell look at this story!"

Cell: "z."

Me: "-_-()Well, Anabelle, you made a good story here. I also think Washu would be a great mom for Vegeta. In one word I LOVE IT!"

Cell: "That was 3 words"

Me: "."

Very good & very original!

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW

Odd... and the first two chapters are a little on the long-winded side. But I still like it. Now it's time for lunch... *grins evilly* I hope poor Tenchi has a MONDO-HIGH grocery budget!

I'MFREEI'MFREE!

No mad scientist syndrome?

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Gave it a chapter and a half and it didn't catch my intrest. It needs a lot of improvment, expanded, and it just doesn't feel right to me. shrug...

Kind of strange. New people and stuff.

-hops around- write more write more! good good story! good good! !

hyper silvery sphinxy

Hey, this is a really good fanfic. And don't worry about the lawyers. Most are like that anyway.

Heh heh heh! That was a good story! I hope you will have more out soon! Please please please pleae please pleaseeeeeeee have more out soon. Chow!

it's really good!

please write alot more!

That was good. For a Bad Guy use someonne from the manga like Yume: Washu's rival(from DREAM A LITTLE SCHEME)or Kain (From THNCHI IN LOVE)OR MAYBE Garyu:The princce of OKU-2(From NO NEED FOR TENCHI:PART 12/1-PART 12/4),but thats your choice or maybe you can make-up a new your choice agin fun writing this story & I look forard to reading this till the end,thank :-)