Wait what!? Flaming red hair like the bad guy?

2 please! with how chapter 4 ended, i feel it would seem cut short if there was only one more chapter, and with two chapters you can iron things out more. Great story by the way, i love how it's like an episode! :)

oh! He so has a partner! I think it's a his girlfriend and him and they want kids but for some reason can't have any!

Great stuff, I love the ending of this chap - very cute!

Can't wait to see what the deal is with the creepy candy guy!

Children, never accept candy, or anything, from strangers.

There are NOT alot of stories here where Peter and Olivia are romantic in the lab, but I for one am all for it!
Love how Walter and Astrid know. :)

Please update soon-I want to know their costumes!

Great! Can't wait to read more!

I liked the reference to David Robert Jones's men going through the wall.
Keep it coming.

Great start, PR!
Any case that starts with Bolivia in bed's gonna be good. ;)
Very well-written. Wonder what Walter picked up on?
Please update soon-I'll PM you if I have any thoughts for ya.