|Reviews for Cold As Ice|
| ano170 12/17/09 . chapter 9
Yay, new chappie! Aw, poor Bella. Emmett's an idiot sometimes!
A couple of grammar/punctuation mistakes (told you I was a nitpicker!), but other than that, great chappie! Can't wait for the next one!
| DancingInTheRain11 12/15/09 . chapter 9
Itsok but ur puncuation needs some work
| Yuuki-Kuran of the Knight 12/15/09 . chapter 9
This is really good!
You're doing very well, keep up the good work!
| Lucy 12/12/09 . chapter 1
Now she must continue.
I love her story...
Now she must continue.
U will continue won't ye?
(It means continue from up to down)
| Lucy 12/12/09 . chapter 8
PLEASE!Please, ...The story...
| TWILIGHT OBSESSER 'N' WWE FAN 10/27/09 . chapter 8
i was smiling and laughing all thru this chapter it was soo sweet and like i sed hu ud go out with mike wen theve got edward
| Xxtwilightlove823xX 10/23/09 . chapter 8
it would be best if you extended the chapters. or have frquent updates
| Xxtwilightlove823xX 10/23/09 . chapter 7
oh brother! Edward's gonna be pissed off.
| Xxtwilightlove823xX 10/23/09 . chapter 6
Yeah,Emmetts always emmett
| vampire-werewolf-human 10/21/09 . chapter 8
FANTASTIC JOB you did really great with this chapter! maybe next time a little longer though:) just trying to help ppl out ! awesome it seems like a thing edward would do great move!
| ano170 10/18/09 . chapter 8
Don't worry-I personally think the change in authorship has gone really well! A good introduction to your writing style, and you kept the feel and atmosphere of the original seven chapters-a feat that only a select handful of authors can acheive, so well done! The only possible thing that I could comment on (and this is coming from a MAJOR nit-picker) is that you might want to replace some of your commas with full stops-it gets kinda hard to read. Other than that, great! I don't think the original author could have chosen a better person to carry on this fic!
| annatwilightfan 10/18/09 . chapter 8
hi thanks thats is a great story- and yeah i like your writing style-and im looking forward to the next chapter... )
| Yuuki-Kuran of the Knight 10/18/09 . chapter 8
This is really good! You've done really well!
I can't wait for the next update!
| Freedomforme 10/17/09 . chapter 8
You may be the new author, but it was still really nice, glad the story can continue.
| Ria0013 10/17/09 . chapter 8
it was alright