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Merrylex
2010-01-03 . chapter 10
I'm sure L is more than able to protect Raito. No one stands a chance against him ^^
Migs4JasperWhitlock
2010-01-03 . chapter 10
update?
:)
im a molly doll
2010-01-03 . chapter 10
no the vampire can so not hurt light
Black-Dranzer-1119
2010-01-02 . chapter 10
Uh-oh looks like they aren't as safe as L thinks they are. I am cruious as to what will happen next. I love this fic so far.
Zena Silverwing
2010-01-02 . chapter 10
Loved all the emotions thrown through the chapter!

I also LUVED Light giving in. One of my fave ways for him to give in to L is him realizing that having someone w/ control over him, so he doesn't have to do anything, is the real pure bliss. ^-^

Yikes, freaky ending! Can't wait for more!

Luvs ya,
Zena
Hellion728
2010-01-02 . chapter 10
Aw, L and Raito are now officially a couple. ^.^ I love how L has no shame in talking about his "problem" infront of people. lol I wonder if the new vampire is the one after Kira?

Can't wait till the next chapter. =)
BonneNuit
2010-01-02 . chapter 10
Love it! Can't wait to read more =D
Cakeat
2009-12-20 . chapter 8
I really enjoy this story. Its not stone-cold, Light being a heartless bastard (even though he is...kinda) but the fact that he feels some romanctic emotion towards L makes it interesting. Besides Light isn't a static character therefore other outcomes are possible.
It will be interesting to see what will happen to the two of them, but I do want to see the innocent Light blossom his love for L a little slower then previously. As a reader I enjoy the journey more then the result.

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Merry Christmas~
LandonLawliet
2009-12-13 . chapter 9
I thought the story was about to come to an end but it looks like something new is coming along.
Battosailover5
2009-12-12 . chapter 9
that was interesting, who's the new guy?
Black-Dranzer-1119
2009-12-12 . chapter 9
Uh-oh. This chapter was awesome and I am surprised that Kan was the one who conviced L to take Light though I still don't like him all that much. It was interesting how you made L use his vampire powers to pleasure Light. I wonder when L will finally decide to turn Light.
Hellion728
2009-12-12 . chapter 9
Uh-oh. I bet the Kira worshiper is Mikami. Or at least has Mikami-like personality. lol

Awesome chapter. I'm glad L and Light are getting along now. It's really sweet.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
im a molly doll
2009-12-12 . chapter 9
no they cant take light he has to be okay and be with L lol
Zena Silverwing
2009-12-12 . chapter 9
*Eyetwitch*

So awesome...*sigh* I'm so elated, giddy, happy, monkey...((don't ask)) that L finally took Light! SQUE!!

Anyways, awesome chapter and creepy ending. I think the end part w/ Light's dad was a little...rushed...and so was some of the other conversations in the chapter, but other than that, I totally felt the emotion in the lemon and knew that that was where you focus was.

Can't wait for more!

Luvs ya,
Zena
BonneNuit
2009-12-12 . chapter 9
Loved the lemon!
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