that's really cool

awesomeness!

Can't wait to read more

This totally has the makings of a truly epic UNCHARTED tale, should you continue. I was completely pulled into the setting and the lack of explanation for Drake's (Sully and Elena's) next Hunt. You really got Nate and Elena's characterisms down to a T as well.


I hope you update soon!
Sakura123

very well written. i love Elena and Drake. I mostly love Elena cuz shes tough and strong and knows how to defend herself, even if it means using a gun. Lol awesome story. Bravo!

oh please continue, i really liked it plz