Hope Hotch can gather the courage to tell her! :) Amazing story and insight into Hotch's thoughts! :)

Very deep! Amazing story! I really enjoyed it!

He only knew that, aside from Haley, she knew him as well as any woman did. In every way, save one. And, as he watched her body glide across the water, he suddenly wished she knew him in that way, too.

I love that. I love that simple,sudden realization. It seems so Hotch-like.

I loved it. :)

Another awesome oneshot, as expected :) You know, most of the CM couples bother me, but this one doesn't that much. I actually kind of like this couple, but yeah, awesome story.

you should continue this!:D maybe show how Hotch finally gets the courage to tell Emily or something.

Hotch honey, how is emily ever going to know you want her if you don't tell her! Sheesh the man's not a coward he's just plain dumb!

While I could NEVER see this scenario playing out because Hotch would just walk away if he ever saw Prentiss like that, you totally made it believable.

And I just love how this turned into a self reflective piece about him and how he hides behind that stoic facade so well.

That was brilliant how you described his feelings perfectly. I totally felt like I was under his skin as I read this.

Great job.

good one.

Very very good. I had nothing in mind at all. This is good, a man broken by one woman wanting another but to afraid to act on it.

Aww that was great hun!