love this so much its awsome

Awesome story. Really. Loved it start to finish. Exactly what a one shot should be, although I wish I could read more!

Lovely job-I just wish it was a little longer. ;)

great one shoot I've had a simlar idea for ages!

Aw! That was very sweet, and a very fitting "fairy tale" ending. I really like it a lot!

I was skeptical when I saw your premise but decided to give it a shot. What a pleasant surprise! This is short, but nicely written. I can definitely see this happening instead of what happens in the movie. Congratulation on a well-written and satisfying piece.

That was beautiful! I quite enjoyed how you brought the fairy-tale elements of the Original Tale of BATB into this one-shot. And the price is none other than sacrifice for each other- the truest of true love.

Gorgeous!

Very cool idea, but the flow was a bit off. I think your tenses are a little out of whack?

That was good. I really like how you showed that they cared. The Beast didn't want Belle in that form not because he didn't love her but because she didn't deserve it. Great job.