Aghhh! So sad. I just love how you write them both. Gorgeous stuff!

Thanks for sharing.

I'm not sure I always understand what you're trying to say, but it's beautiful anyway. Great descriptions and very poignant. Nice fic!

Wow, you're such a brilliant writer. The grammar and vocabulary that you use it technically perfect and your fanfictions reach a level that many cannot achieve, myself included. I have all these wonderful thoughts, positioned much as you write them and yet they turn out brief, and, quite frankly, rubbish.

I admire your writing skill and hope you continue this soon.

It's powerful. Completely IC. I liked this chapter very much.

Very clever! I always thought those two had something going on between them... :)

Wonderful

I really like the creativity shown with using the spectrum of colors. That being said I like the second chapter better as fanfiction because it is more specific to the Harry Potter universe, I hope you continue to write all of the other chapters like that and have a stunning conclusion.

That was amazing, very well written.

Nice one! Looking forward for reading the next one! (and of course, chapter 31 of Cat&Mouse)

I love your stories!

Wow. That was very deep. I'd be interested to see what happens next with Orange.

Very nice. I love all the imagery, and your focus on the single color. Well done.