| Reviews for I'll Try To Fix You |
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jewishGAGA 12/2/10 . chapter 7yay! that was pretty deep coming from cartman's mouth! cartman is SOOOOO in denial! xD gah...what did cartman doooooooo? grr, gotta wait D: |
RemmyBlack 11/21/10 . chapter 6hey! this is really good ) |
michiyoLove 11/15/10 . chapter 6I really loved this chapter of the fanfic. Most likely the best, saddest, and well written of the series :) The first part was great! I loved the details of Kyle's home life. It seemed realistic. I actually got a bit scared when Kyle's mom showed up ;; The second part was amazing aswell. I loved how Kyle was confused about his feelings about Cartman and how he would try to deny him, even though Kyle saved Cartman (but could barely believe it :) Overall, great chapter and can't wait to read the next parts :) |
Carys 11/14/10 . chapter 6 AWESOME! Keep it up, LOVE IT wen u update! |
jewishGAGA 11/12/10 . chapter 6aw, the beginning made me start tearing up! D; yes, kyle's mom may be a bitch, but god damn...(actually i gained respect for her after the jersey shore ep) and i really can't wait for cartman's pov, protect your jew cartman!3 |
Rut Lance -Crystal Fairy 11/10/10 . chapter 6What a chapter! I really loved the way it depicts the relationship between Kyle and his mom, who is quite sick for my taste. And wanted to publish the part where they find out that Cartman does not really started the rumor, but it is also important to see the version of Cartman and how he feels about it. Heavens! I'll have to wait, although I'm not in a position to complain, I myself have left many people hanging. See ya! 3 |
bunniesarecool80 11/10/10 . chapter 6Yes! Another chapter! Wow, this was pretty dark, but it did get the point across about his mother issues. I can detect a definite shift now, and I can't wait for the next update -wags tail You did have a few minor typos like after the first paragraph "that even being with my friends could amend it." You probably meant to put a 'not' in there somewhere. :p And in one case you put ehad instead of head lol. Any way, I can't wait to see how the story progresses from here, and I hope the next chap focuses more on Cartman _ |
8xSayAnythingx8 11/9/10 . chapter 1Awesome chapter! I literally checked everyday (or I try to) for a new one (even though I have it on Story Alert buy idc) and I freaked out when I saw this chapter up! It was so worth the wait! |
xEmerald Isle 11/9/10 . chapter 6Love it! This was my favourite chapter so far too! :D I love how Kyle's so confused with his feelings for Cartman. And I love how he saved him from being strangled by Stan! :D And I agree with you that your best writing is definitely in this chapter. It's awesome! :D I can't wait to read about how Cartman's dealing with the dream he had. And I also can't wait for that Kyman video! :D Update soon please :D |
freemanrage 11/8/10 . chapter 6;A: When Kyle was describing how much he wanted a REAL mom, I almost shed a tear. Oh, Stan is such a good friend! -heart- Getting grounded for two weeks, though; that sucks. Still touching how Kyle hugged him. :) Ugh, Sheila. This chapter was so excellent. I literally shouted, "YES!" when I saw you had updated. x) This story makes a happy Christy. And a sad Christy. And everything in between -heart- Haha, the ending reminded me of that song...I Don't Care? :D Yeah, that was it. By Apocolytpica or something like that. Update soon, loveleh writer! |
Eric Cartman forever 11/8/10 . chapter 6Awesome chapter! :) |
ActionGal07aol.com 11/7/10 . chapter 5 Man, this was such a damn good story. So Kyle and Cartman both end up having a dream on how the other is gonna die. I want to read more! This is one of the best Kyman stories I've discovered! I hope you update this real soon. |
ActionGal07aol.com 11/7/10 . chapter 4 Christ, So Kyle went ahead and destroyed that xbox360. I thought that he already broke that in Tonsil Trouble. This is getting real good, I love how your portraying the story. You need to continue this soon. |
ActionGal07aol.com 11/7/10 . chapter 3 So Cartman isn't gay? So he says! I swear I am constantly catching Cartman doing something that appears to be on the gay side to me. And I swear he is just dying to a hold of Kyle in a real sexual manner. Sure, people say that he does it for humiliation, but that can still have something to do with sexual acts. |
ActionGal07aol.com 11/7/10 . chapter 2 I think Kyle might want to pay Clyde in order to obtain that information. Your getting me seriously curious on who spread the rumor. I have a couple of guesses, but I want to find out for myself on what happens next. |