See! This stuff rocks! Seriously, seriously rocks! Implications of war and power and romance and terror - dramatic, dangerous, tense. I know everyone is obsessed with the idea that Peter's abduction caused the war, but everyone is bad at maths. Olivia is only one year younger than Peter and Walter and Bell began experimenting on her and the others when they were 3 - Peter wasn't even sick yet. And from the beginning the experiments were part of ZFT, part of the prophesy. Don't get me wrong, I'm sure JJ and the writers are stupid enough to make the same slip, they've made plenty in the past. But denizens of the fandom are better than they are and must remain so. So that the spirit and potential of this wonderful show live on in fanfiction. Please, please write more like this.

That was awesome. ( I'm not good at leaving long reviews. Sry)

Man! Angsty Peter and Olivia fic! This was so good! I liked how you showed Olivia's emotions in this story! I hope you write more like this soon!

Thanks so much for sharing,

ZeusFluff

I really like this one. Then again, I'm one of those authors who likes to kill off favourite characters too. As a matter of fact, I'm killing off one in the story I'm currently working on. You did it well, and you did it convincingly also.

Is this part of your Slip Off the Choke Chain 'verse, or is this a standalone? Cos if it's a part of your 'verse, then it's just plain depressing...

Great job though, and I hope you write another story soon. Hopefully, maybe this time you'll give us some fluff and romance to make up for the tragedy of this one?

LunaWho

Interesting one-shot!