Aw, I love it! This is such a moving, passionately written story. Please continue!

oh come on
it was getting good you should totally continue it

I think it was fine the way it was! I really liked that ending as opposed to your other EdWin endings. Really cute and kind of angsty on Winry's part. Kudos! You rock Cuz!

See ya Halloween! Happy writing!
~Sasukez~
Your Cousin X3