Beautiful. I don't care if it sucks, it's beautiful.

this truley speaks to me on how death affects people, but in the end you may rejoin them once again...
anywayz i truely love it, i can fantize this happening. your a great writer.
keep writing~

I tend to agree with Beanmaster 9001; You should step it up to short stories.
Keep the stories coming...

I think what touches me the most out of the whole story is how he doesn't want her to die...then he suddenly doesn't feel so alone anymore and his eternal suffering in the after life is mended because she's by his side once again.

I like how you have her still trying her damnedest to still be faithful even though he's dead and you can feel her dying on the inside.

I hate it though...I don't even know anything about fucking Sonic, but you make the characters feel so life like, so realistic. As if the pain is actually there residing withing you and you fuel it into your writing. You know how much I hate having sensitive feelings, yet your stories always evoke something...like they hit that one little string and that my friend is amazing. Your work needs to up a level into short stories and out of fanficktshuns! That's just my opinion...

ALL IN ALL I love your work! I really do, so please continue to write.

-Beanmaster 9001

Wow, baby that was simply just beautiful. i absolutely loved, truth be told it even made me tear up. It was perfect it flowed so well. It was almost as i could actually feel her pain. I love you, and all you amazing talents baby.
:]

That is so beautiful...

When you told me about your ideas for this, I had no idea how you were going to develop it. It seemed like impossible subject matter, and I didn't know how it was going to happen. But this is beautiful, it flows well, and I freaking love you. The exposition and development is flawless, and you've done a much better job than I could have.

God damnit Amy.

See you around dog. Good luck with school.

Truly moving. Just like it's a part of me.

Have a lovely day, my friend.

Say, this wasn't bad at all... as a matter of fact, it's probably the most "restrained" of your stories, if you know what I'm saying. With your permission, I'd like to add this short piece of work into the official selection of our latest "Dark Side of the Hog" couples' collab. What do you say?
Can I post it?

Wow,this is a brilliant story.

That was so freakin' beautiful!

I will miss you very much.

That was awesome. :)