You're a very good writer, but I've noticed with this fic and your other haru/michi fic that you sometimes add awkward japanese words into english speech. I think this breaks up the flow, even if your intent is to make it sound like an anime or manga. It's difficult to know what the words or sound effects mean. For example is it necessary to say "Oi" or "Ne" when you can easily use "Hey"? Just a thought. I find your fics quite creative! :D I'll be awaiting an update

Okay now I'm mad at you! Where's the rest of the story! this looks so promising and you leave it like this!...but I forgive you because you've been updating your other fics...take care SeraEris-chan

Yay ^_^ It's so moving summary with nice opening

Hell... I can't wait anymore, Shimatta , you made me sign up here just to ask for the next(it's more like beg, but I don't wanna show that therefore I'll be ridiculous, ne Eri-chan -_^)

Nice start, can't wait for more like usual :) :D

mIchiru in a man body? weird fic! But i trust u : it will be funny!

hola me gusta tu fic.. el summary promete una historia interesante... plis conti conti! jajaj. Perdon por no escribir en ingles pasa que no lo manejo bien... saludos desde argentina.. bye!!

sounds cute.
cant wait.

I like this idea. Can't wait to find out what Michiru's brother is like. This will be a fun story.

Now didn't I yell at you about posting a new story before finishing one of your many others? You're falling into the same old habit I used to be in...shame shame shame. I see nothing was changed over what I had read lol. You need to finish your others before I beg for more to this ya know.