 Dave the Fish Guy 2009-12-05 . chapter 5Wow, good collection of stories here sweetie. I'm gonna do a bulk review of all of them.
1. ItWasAllJustADream >.> Good story though, felt sorry for Heather after waking up. Gotta wonder who/waht tripped the music box though...
2. Sad story, babe. Poor James... and Laura. Nice nod to the end of SH2 at the end, with the vanishing letter/envelope.
3. Again, sad. I felt sorry for James, having Laura suddenly do that to him. Well, sudden to me >.> well written though.
4. I worked out this one about halfway through, but that didn't make it any less sad. Poor Heather, and Douglas for having to watch her go through all that. The fact that she snaps out of it only to go into it again was what I found saddest.
5. This one confused me at first. Then I re-read it. Henry's crazy, huh? At least he didn't say 'What... the hell?' >.> So the ring's possessed, nice dynamic. Interesting to see Laura at the end. At least, I assume it's Laura. Also, nice job with the title, almost didn't catch it.
All in all, good collection, babe. I can't wait to see more of them if you get around to it.
Keep up the good work!
Dave xx |