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wjobsessed 12/20/09 . chapter 2Nicely done. Love Peter's thoughts here. "I want to hear her call me 'baby.' I agree he would remember that. It looked in the pilot as though he locked that moment into his head. "Oh God I want to hear her groan like she did under hypnosis," that too. :) "Even if Rachel had been right about her liking me..." I LOVE this whole paragraph. And the ending is great. Of course he lights up like a Christmas tree since he'll get to see her in a second. So cute! |
wjobsessed 10/17/09 . chapter 1Welcome to the Fringe fandom here at ff, K-Shandra. I thought this was good. They are both in UST and frustrated in their souls and you've captured it in just a few paragraphs. Would you continue this possibly? If not, you got more Bolivia? |