|Reviews for Doubts and Frustrations|
| wjobsessed 12/20/09 . chapter 2
Nicely done. Love Peter's thoughts here.
"I want to hear her call me 'baby.' I agree he would remember that. It looked in the pilot as though he locked that moment into his head.
"Oh God I want to hear her groan like she did under hypnosis," that too. :)
"Even if Rachel had been right about her liking me..." I LOVE this whole paragraph.
And the ending is great. Of course he lights up like a Christmas tree since he'll get to see her in a second. So cute!
| wjobsessed 10/17/09 . chapter 1
Welcome to the Fringe fandom here at ff, K-Shandra.
I thought this was good. They are both in UST and frustrated in their souls and you've captured it in just a few paragraphs.
Would you continue this possibly?
If not, you got more Bolivia?