I just love how Akira turns the whoe conversation around on Hikaru. Akira, for the win!

Been a while since I finished reading the manga. Still, this was amusing and I picked up what I'd forgotten before the story suffered for it.

Haha, cute. Funny and cute. ^_^ Definitely well written, light-hearted, and overall amusing. Thank you!

"Well, he also had that bizarre little habit of throwing him up against walls, but Akira was pretty sure he couldn't pull that one off if he tried. Not that he wanted to try--he had no desire to emulate Ogata. Ever."

Uh-huh. Of coourse you don't want to push Hikaru up against walls, Akira. Of course you don't.

...Absolutely loved this! Seriously, seriously funny. I love Akira's inflexibility, but also how he eventually comes around when he realises it'll annoy Hikaru. Hikaru's great, too -- we're always so interested in our dreams. Spot-on for characterisations, far as I can tell.

Probably my favourite line would be: "And now Shindo was looking at him like /he/ was the brain-damaged one. Excellent."

Just fantastic.

*burst out laughing* someone needs to teach Touya the basics of fashion, and make sure he follows them... What's wrong with an argyle bodysuit?!? He has to ask?

I like how Shindou ends up being the one to drag them back to with the same logic Akira used when Hikaru was trying to start the conversation.

I agree about Akira's superpower being his stare. (Hikaru's fan tapping idea made me laugh.)

Well written. Fun read.

OMIGOD. What's wrong with Akira having argyle bodysuit? Hahaha!

A lot. o.O

I laughed a lot at the end. -thumbs up- Good job! Hope there's more humour if you ever make a sequel.

~NyaniHenshi

Oh this is delightful~!! He, 'honourable alter ego', I love your phrasing. And Akira totally wants to emulate Ogata with the whole shoving-Hikaru-up-against-a-wall move, he can't fool anyone. XP Awesome work!!

~fd97

Haha!! This is great!

An argyle body suit. *cracks up laughing* So I read this again and that last line hits me more than the last time. I can just imagine Akira in it and Shindo in poisonous yellow spandex. Lol.

It IS better than spandex. Barely. But then, everything's better than spandex, no matter by how small a margin.

Well that was awkward.

Really fun to read this. Killer death glare.

OMFG LOL ! ^^ XD Touya has NO fashion sense. At all!

You made me literally laugh out loud while reading this (er.. well, not literally.. um, actually? Eh, whatever, you get the idea.) I really liked Shindo's line about friends, that was cute! And, "Unlike Akira's honorable mind-reading alter ego, Shindo wasn't a telepath." That was very clever. Keep up the great stories!

lol. they are engaged in a really pointless conversation

wah! cute!, but also good :) thx for sharing