Great story, it was weird at first, by having hardly a mention to Rachel but it was good, you did a good jobb writing Ivy : )

I really like it, I don't mind the different point of view at all. I love getting to ssee Ivy's mind and I'm glad Jenks was there. I was kind of hoping to see Ivy interact with Rachel, hopefully when Rachel's not being an idiot. If you decide to make this longer than a one shot my vote is for that but I'll be happy no matter what you write. Good job :)