Great story! That was so sad! Not fair! You made me tear up!

oh gosh that was heartbreaking. I would hate having to go through that...but man i got angry at Piper in this one-shot. I agree with Grams, she was acting like she hated Chris. I believe that the Chris Perry and the other Chris (baby) are parts of each other and of course baby Chris will be the half of Chris Perry that gets to enjoy the life he created.

I know he died on the show but i kinda hope he got to go back home to see the world he created, i don't think its fair for him to die. Having Grams come down and tell Piper that Chris loved both versions of her as if they were the same made me dislike Piper more because i felt as if she wanted baby Chris to be Chris Perry and that she wouldn't love him if they were different. Still...she made up for it in the end.

I really liked the idea, the writing but i'm not sure if i liked the way you made Piper. In my mind i think she would have been confused, but she would have loved both versions of Chris in their own ways. Still everyone is entitled to their own opinion and it was really well written! Good job Dx

Wait, unless the future that Chris came from, and returned before he died was only one of a POSSIBLE futures, I think him going 'home' to die was a mute point. Wouldn't the future he originaly came from no longer exist if he DID wind up changing the past? So him going back to be with the version of his family that made his life misrerable growing up, would have been a waste of time I think. *lol* If he'd stayed he could still exist in spirit in the past, and still be with the version of his family that hes grown to now loves.

is not too much troublem I really like all Chris stories well not all but well Chris is my favourite caracther I didnt like the way they handle Chriss death in the show like if a distant thing not taking on consideration everyoness feelings mostly Pipers but you did

so great story

so sweet i almost cried

amazing one shot

well done

Not your best work, but not a bad job either. Like the idea, and you did a decent job with characterization.