 PureWhiteMagic 2009-12-05 . chapter 4Please continue this! It's getting more interesting now! Please!? I'd be really happy if you did!~
This is great! It's well written, and has a very good plot.
Awesome job! This is really entertaining, and it's the best story I've read today on this site. I love every single part of the story so far, and hope to continue enjoying it until it ends!
I'll die if you don't continue it, by the way. So...
Please continue it! :) |
 sakerat 2009-12-03 . chapter 4Don't say maybe! This story is really good!
I like what you did with England's boss...every country gets an a..hole at some point. |
 Yaoishoujo 2009-12-03 . chapter 4*yaoi_queen from LJ here*
This is really good! Holy crap, Arthur's boss is a dickwad! What the hell is up with his actions? Totally uncalled for. It scared the shit out of me when you described all the blood Alfred was coughing up. Geez... he's getting worse. ;_; What's wrong with him? The first thought in my mind was the horrible economy.
Anyhoo, I hope Arthur finds and rescues America. I also hope the other nations help out. Poor Germany. Italy understands him so well. :3 |
 Tinkeroftime 2009-12-02 . chapter 4This was the best chapter yet! Although I did enjoy the first too! And it made me happy how Japan looked upon America, asa kid. He really is just one. But Poor AMerica, what is wrong wiht him? And where is he now? Is he in a prison? I'm wondering! So when you wrote down, to be continued ...maybe. I was like no...that cannot happen! It has to be continued!
So please continue. I'm so looking forward to it! |
 LupinandHarry 2009-12-02 . chapter 4omg..England's boss needs to be assassinated. Right now.
What a twist, I can't believe it! |
 Guppyvis 2009-12-02 . chapter 4no.. America, don't die! TT_TT *hopes for happy ending*
But England was really cool, disobeying his boss like that x3
I loved it! :D |
 awesomeone 2009-12-02 . chapter 4 no 'maybe's! you gotta write another one!! ya gotta! this is too awesome and way to...er...suspencefull to stop now!! besides, your writing rocks!! |
 Kami011 2009-12-01 . chapter 4m...maybe? you're kidding right?
you ARE going to update...right? ;_;
this fic is fantastic! cant wait for the next chapter! |
 rae1112 2009-12-01 . chapter 4And to add insult to injury, you MIGHT update. T.T |
 ForeverFallen304 2009-12-01 . chapter 4omg o.o dont leave us hanging please! Take your time but dont end it here T_T
Great job, very suspenseful. |
 Guppyvis 2009-11-29 . chapter 3I love it! x3 *subs* |
 nagihachan 2009-11-17 . chapter 3Love it~ xDD
Why did England suddenly talk about war? OAO
Update pliz >D |
 Shawah 2009-11-17 . chapter 3 LOVED IT! Keep going~! Its so much fun to read! Although, I'm kind of iffy on how England is reacting. It seems like their personalities have been switched a bit, but I can understand why. SO. Love it still. xD |
 UnknownYmouS.cYcLoNe05 2009-11-17 . chapter 3aw, why was alfred's answer expected, and yet, heart-breaking? T^T MORE |
 LupinandHarry 2009-11-16 . chapter 3First of all, why would you get drunk if youre watching over someone that is really sick. Come on England, really? He's not the nicest drunk either. -_-
The last line was awesome btw.
I can totally picture Alfred's expression.
please update soon! |