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psychobubbles
2009-12-07 . chapter 7
i loved how you combined the fairy tale with osorezan revoir and funbari no uta (along with other manga elements). Since i prefer the manga over the anime, this story is especially good. *faved*
Smart Angel
2009-12-07 . chapter 7
That ending was so cute!! I loved Yoh's proposal! Him asking Anna to marry him.., Or rather, Anna going on saying what she wanted (demanded), was adorable! And then Tamao used her board to make a bet. XD Never thought she would do that. Great Fanfic! Too bad is over T_T
djyxa
2009-12-07 . chapter 7
i like the ending! :D

this is really told like a tale.. not so complicated that everthing is explained. ^_^

i hope to read more of your stories! and others to come! XD
yehey
2009-12-07 . chapter 7
whew~ this was a great story! i can imagine how hard it was to write! you did a really good job with this!

though i wished there were more moments about yoh and/or anna, especially in this chapter... i kinda felt that there were more of the others...

anyways! it was great!
elpatolocosisi
2009-12-06 . chapter 7
Very nice indeed, I was looking forward to the ending (unless of course you have another chapter in mind) of this fic, 'cause we all knew she couldn't die just like that.
I've always found amazing Anna's demanding personality, how come I've never met (or seen) a girl like that in my entire life?!? Although it would have been a nice surprise for her, in the end, to announce she was pregnant, once more, aggainst all her plans.
Regarding the plot and structure of the story, I can say nothing at all since I haven't read nor watched the Beauty and the Beast, so I'll just say it was nice and I liked it even if it wasn't truth to the original.

Anyway, great job! This was a very good fic and you are a very talented writer.

PS:
And yes!! I am keeping tabs on Critical Condition. I think it'll be worth the waiting though.
yehey
2009-12-01 . chapter 6
great chapter! i loved it!

I`m gonna look forward to how you`re not gonna kill anna! eheheh... i know you wont kill her! right?!?

i will be waiting for the possibly the last chapter... sigh~ i hope there`s more...

this was great!
Smart Angel
2009-11-30 . chapter 6
This chapter was so intense! And you can't kill Anna! I won't allow it! You just can't! Yoh and Anna have to end up together, happy! They just HAVE to!
Animewitch17
2009-11-29 . chapter 6
OMFG! Don't let Anna die!

This was a superb chapter. Can't believe Hao went down just like that though, but who cares?? ^_^

Anyways, what's Yoh going to do? It's pretty obvious it's too late to save Anna now... or is it?? :D
HPCS2
2009-11-29 . chapter 6
MOAR D:

AHEOUAHE How annoying when writers stop right on the most WAH part XD

xD PLEASE UPDATE, AWESOME STORY.
djyxa
2009-11-29 . chapter 6
gah! DX\ Anna can't die!

and you won't probably let her right?

oh! i can't wait for the next chapter!

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! XD
yehey
2009-11-23 . chapter 5
I absolutely loved this chapter! there were so much yoh and anna in it!

and i`m really excited to read the next chapter. hope you update this weekend or earlier... heheheh... ;p
Nightglider
2009-11-22 . chapter 5
LO-VED IT! UPDATE!
djyxa
2009-11-21 . chapter 5
hoho~! climax next chapter?! i can't wait for it!!

hehe.. Anna hiding her true feelings! XD

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :D
Smart Angel
2009-11-21 . chapter 5
I just finished catching up with this fanfic a few hours ago and you already have another chapter?! XD

NO! TT_TT NO, YOh, please come back! DOn't leave Anna! Come back, please! Please! *never watched Beauty and the Beast so has no idea how it goes*

This chapter was so adorable. Yoh and Anna were so cute together in the begining and... Please, don't keep them apart for too long!
Smart Angel
2009-11-21 . chapter 4
I just read the entire fanfic and fell in love with it. *-* Yoh and Anna are so cute! They are perfect together, and I love how you made Redseb and Yoh friends! The story is so good, how you are writing every detail, I'm impressed. Did it take long to think about everything? I mean, there are some Beauty and the Beast and Shaman King at the same time (Osorezan Revoir), as well as some original ideas, to sum up everything must have taken a lot of work! And you're doing a great job at it!

Update soon!
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