That was so stinkin' awesome! ^U^ (lol. Cute profile pic, too! XD)

My goodness, I REALLY despise Jadis, but looking back and seeing what happened with her is so cool! ^U^ 'Little Sister' has SUCH a crazy plotline, but it's AMAZING as well! ^U^

Brilliant work! Your names for Charnians were so good, and your structure/language is BEAUTIFUL--just as I would think Lewis or anyone else would do it!! *U*

She's so true to her character, too; regretting what she did for a second before letting it go, killing all of the failures, creating something of new magic, and thinking things through, unlike her sister! *U* Goodness, you are SO WONDERFUL at characterization!!

*U* *U* Rock on!
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tskishima7499 :D ;D :) ;)

P.S.--Can't wait to see the upcoming Jadis ones, too! ^U^

ilysia actually recommended this story to me because I expressed curiosity about the Lady of the Green Kirtle. I knew she had to be linked with Jadis in some way, and I love your interpretation of their relationship! It's also interesting to read of how Jadis came to conquer Narnia, and you've answered that in a delightfully refreshing way.

I also liked how you mentioned the languages, and how the Narnian language is called "Lion's tongue." It's also interesting to think about the different languages where the Pevensies are concerned...they seemed to automatically understand all spoken language in Narnia. Where they blessed by the Lion to automatically understand? It would be amusing to see their reaction if they were to somehow run into an English-speaker; would they be able to tell the difference between the two languages?

Okay, nerdy rant over! Thanks for sharing this, I really enjoyed it!

You have such a talent for taking words and shaping them into breathtakingly beautiful and dramatic tales- and this tale is a wonderful example of that. The very basis of it, too, is wonderful: remain firm in my belief that Jadis and the Lady of the Green Kirtle are the two most under-explored characters in Narnian canon, and yet they are among the most fascinating. I love this explanation of the Lady- we're never given one in the Chronicles, yet there are tantalizing hints that she is somehow tied to Jadis. Your interpretation is lovely and dark and glorious. Bravo.