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K4w411-Ch1b1
2009-12-05 . chapter 2
Oh my gosh I love evil/creepy Ivan!! <3
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE, please??
Shatterdoll
2009-11-29 . chapter 2
I really do hope you continue on with this. It's absolutely fascinating. The hint of darkness in Ivan mixed with the teasers of what it is without revealing it altogether (who is mama? What does Ivan want?) has completely hooked me. Awesome work. I also love how you've written Alfred and Matthew in this as father and son, they're so cute.
AliceGoBoom
2009-11-26 . chapter 1
This is kind of reminding me of that movie Orphan o-o
It scared the shit out of me >.>
But then again, most horrors do...
That's why I watch them...
That's also why I'm reading this! o0o
I am just fuh-reeking out!
This is really amazing so far, and If I could I would totally make a movie out of it! x3
Can't wait for the next one!
Terminally Ambivalent
2009-11-17 . chapter 2
Dude, this reminds me EXACTLY of that movie The Orphan. She was Russian too! Creepy... You seen it? If not, you should! This is like spot on to that movie. Anyways, awesome story! Please update as soon as you can! :D

Two-finger salute,
Captain*
Lagpak-Pinya
2009-11-15 . chapter 2
this is amazing ;u; i love your style of writing >uw<
sasunarukyuubi
2009-11-14 . chapter 1
I... am disturbed. I'm not sure if it's a good or bad disturbed yet, though. lol
Superbi
2009-11-07 . chapter 2
I see what you did thar. With thoes names and all. Lovely story. Can't wait till its updated~
SargentPepper64
2009-11-03 . chapter 2
This is getting interesting O:
I can't wait for the next chapter xD
bahl
2009-10-25 . chapter 2
This reminds me of Wicked the moive with Julia Stiles not the musical about the witch.
Have you seen it?
I can see Ellie Christianson and Ivan as friend at least Ivan in this fic as well as parter in crime.
hollyivy7
2009-10-25 . chapter 2
how old is alfred? please don't make him almost 40. that's a little too pedo for me. maybe 22?
Annir-Chan
2009-10-25 . chapter 2
Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
greenpanic6
2009-10-25 . chapter 2
i really love creppy Ivan
Lunarkitty15
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
OHMYGOSH! Love love love! Tee-hee! Go ahead and break her, Ivan! Then you can have Alfred all to yourself! *cackles evily*

*coughcough* Hee...sorry about that! >.> Anyways, I hope you update uber soon! I love this plot!
XSilverXGoldXSonataX
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
Ooh. Cool, another chapter! Ivan won't kill little Matvey, right? 'Cause he loves Ivan, yes he does! I dun really care about Morgan so much, (:P) but he can't kill little Mattie! He's too adorable, he is. I can't wait for more!
APurpleAvacado
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
Oh, amazing as usual!

I can't wait for an update!
Ha, lol. Would you believe I mistook Fey for a Fem!Arthur? I did. I am ashamed. xD

Ivan~ <33

Matvey is so adorable~ I really hope Ivan comesto genuinely like Matthew. If he's not already. I love the voice of Mama in Ivan's head. And I'm loving Ivan's acting skills. I think he should do exceedingly well in Drama at school. Or would he be deliberately bad...? Hmm...

I really can't wait for an update..!

Although, one final thing, how come Polcarstva hasn't been updated in a while? I absolutely adore that fic. I love this one too, but it was how I discovered you, so naturally, I want an update, although you're most likely a very busy person, so I won't push you for an update, I'm jsut letting you know I'm a fan, and will wait for you never to abandon the fic.

<3
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