You are evil to leave it there. :( Enjoyed the story so far though, and Rosalie gave me giggles.

OMG I love this story, you must finish it please? I like you invented Nicholas he is an interesting character. Way to go look forward to seeing the rest of this.

Wow. Loved the back story! I'd love to see more on the Bella/Nicholas story. Can't wait for the next one.

oh part 3 sounds very enticing

just been reading this fic and wow i thinks its really good, well written i'm glued can't wait for more

yo

its amazing wirte more please

pleaseplease with a chery on top

bye

Another great story!

Looking forward to Part I update!

Hey, just a suggestion, but Nicholas and Charlie deserve some happiness unto themselves too, no? Maybe include an epilogue describing how they found their mates? Or even better, a separate story on how Nicholas fines his mate in the future (though he should ALWAYS be Renesme's father!)

Really wonderful story! Beautifully written! Love the plot!

Can't wait for the Edward-Bella Reunion!

i cant wait to read part 3..amazing story great job!

this is really good

Great chapter, I'm interested to see where you go with this!

ah i cant wait

Wow! Amazing chapter! Please update soon!

I love your story please update soon it's such an amazing writing style the way you word things is just beyond wow I don't have words!

This is great, you did an amazing job!