OMG lol its amazing so its Jonsey, Jonsey is the one tess is going to fall for is it and theres one more question... actully 2 dose tyson trust jim now and is natalie still haveing issues about silver? Cant wait to find out:)

Aww, I knew it was almost over, but I'm still going to be sad to see it go. This is such a good story!
All of the romance is just... I'm running out of good adjectives, but it's seriously, seriously awesome!
I laughed out loud when Jonesy started singing The Sailor Song!

You're a phenomenal writer :)

Wel... Since you updated pretty soon, I decided not to join the mob. For now. ;) (Evil laugh)
Wonder what'll happen next?
Hey, btw, if the machine is no longer working, does that mean the gravity is gonna be normal on Xenta?

Whoa! Definitely not expecting that.
Very intriguing (as usual).
Keep writing!

wow

A LOVE IT AND I CANT BELIVE IT NEXT CHAPTER NEXT CHAPTER NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE OH AND P.S

mabey while tess is suck down there she can tell the rest of the story on how her parents met ... omg i still dont know who is tess going to fall for a (sigh) I still think tyson loves tess but well see... its more like ill see ... yea anyways the story is great!

No prob for the idea.
I really liked the way you put in the whole, evil machine thing. ;)
I hope Tessy doesn't get hurt... much. hehehe...
Waiting for your next update, which I hope is gonna be soon. Or I'm joining the mob. *shot*
-Nims.

"And then everything went black..." Man! I have done that in so many of my fics.

Cliched or not btw, you sure no how to leave people hanging on a cliffy. I hope Jonesy doesn't get too injured.

Hahaha... You made Jim faint. I dont know why but i found that it was hilarious.

Keep up the good work.

-Nims.

PS. (singsong) ~I know what the secret is.~ And you're welcome. ;)

Aw! I loved the whole Anthony/Jim/Silver reunited thing. That was really well done! *heart melts*

As for your cliché ending, I can't see anything about it because I ended one of my chapters the same way. lol.

Keep up the fantastic work!

I. Must. Have. More.

Not a threat just really excited

One word. Awesome!
I love it. now you better get to work soon and update quickly or else... I'm ... uh... Joining the angry mob! Yeah, that's right. I'll join the angry mob if you don't update soon enough. *shot*
-Nims

A(breath)...A(need to read)...(gasping for air)...A... well thats an awsome story cant wait to read the rest love it peace:)

OH Sweet

No you're right - suspense is good, provided you update soon! Geez, every chapter ends with me going "What?! No! What happens next! I must know what happens next!"

So, obviously, I love your story, as you already know, so please keep updating!
Happy Holidays!

O M G A I LOVE IT A ITS PERFECT OMG TYSON HE COULDT LIKE ANOTHER GIRL ITS NOT POSSIBLE A OH... WAIT THERES VAL HE LIKES VAL A BUT TESS SHE DOSENT RELLY LIKE JONSEY OR DOES SHE ? AND JIMS DAD I CANT BELIVE IT SO HE DIDT LEAVE HIS FAMILY ON POURPOSE O WHAT ABOUT SILVER IS HE ON THE PLANET TOO OR WAS IT A MIX UP ALSO NATILE...WELL I THINK NATILE SHOULD HAVE SOME ACTION IN THIS STORY AMELIA TO IDK BUT THIS STORY IS OVER THE TOP AWSOME KEEP WRITTING PLEASE!

oh about my story i just signed up on fanfic so i dont know how to do that but if u can go on my profile SweetAngel183 it should be there... tell me what you think k peace:)