Great story, Michael, and very believable. I always wished we had more Scorpius/Chiana interaction, and I particularly liked the Chiana/John bit at the end ;)

I like this story. It's very interesting, you don't always see Chiana and Scorpius. I think you got into their minds very well, and I absolutely loved it when John showed up. I usually stick by the canon when it comes to television, but I do think John and Chiana are very close, and I liked how you portrayed their relationship. The last line was perfect. "Play safe." It just fits, you know? Well, you wrote it, so I guess you do.

Happy writing!