 TechNomaNcer28 9/15/10 . chapter 1Whoooo,hot one there! |
 RandomPerson535 11/23/09 . chapter 1awesomeness |
 Sway 10/20/09 . chapter 1 If there's more of this yummy goodness, then YES You cut it waay too short! More please! |
 Amarissia 10/19/09 . chapter 1I like that Angeal being blown doesn't require a real warning.
M, gorgeous, you are spoiling me with these! But also encouraging me to write, and making me grin, of course.
Cut it short? You mean there's more? HAND IT OVER!) |
 Soyna 10/18/09 . chapter 1Another nice little ficlet with Zack and Angeal.
I like how you made Zack so eager to please but wanting to make Angeal his... submit. |
 Silverin 10/18/09 . chapter 1No, dont worry, its perfect! ;o) Really nice smexy stuff, Zack, the cute pup, trying so hard to please his beloved Angeal... and he does make him submit to him! Doesnt matter how much stubborn he is. Yay!
Thank you! |