   Maori 5/8/05 . chapter 3Wow, just...wow. The first chapter was wonderful, and Logan's POV was done perfectly. A little over the top with the Asha angst, but I won't nitpick. I wish there were more than 3 chapters |
| RoxyAnn 1/31/03 . chapter 3 Well, since it's been a year I guess you aren't going to finish this fic.
I'm afraid to read any of your other work because you may not finish them.
This is so rotten. DA fans of Max and Logan don't have anything left in live except fan fic. VS3 is very season 2, so I don't like most of it. |
| Kyre 1/12/03 . chapter 3 Hey! I read ch.1 a long time ago and I think I never got around to reading chs. 2&3...but I did just now and I love them. Will you be continuing this story? Please say yes! |
| Kasman 12/25/02 . chapter 3 Ooh, another Asha-as-a-real-person fic. Really well-done. Thanks for this) |
| JoBelle 5/20/02 . chapter 3 Oh that's just mean! I neeed more! And I need it now! I'm on the verge of tears and I'm even almost feeling sorry for Asha, I need more now! |
| Music 4/16/02 . chapter 3 Nice. |
| UNKNOWN 2/18/02 . chapter 3 This is one of the best fics I've ever read, please write more soon! |
| Priska 2/15/02 . chapter 3 write more please! i've read until chap 3 so far and it's just... breath-taking, i'm crying!
please write more |
| Danici 2/13/02 . chapter 3 Please write more soon. |
| Terin 2/12/02 . chapter 3 I really enjoyed reading this-it's definetly the best Dark Angel fic I've read. I really like your writing style and I can't waite for the next part. |
| Michelle Drake 2/12/02 . chapter 3 That was SOOOOOOO good! You MUST post more!:) |
| Julia 2/12/02 . chapter 3 This is incredibly beautiful. The emotion is so powerful and the writing style is amazing. One of the best written pieces I've seen here. I hope you continue very soon. (And she'd better wake up, damn it!) |
| Aquila1 2/12/02 . chapter 3 So very happy to see you back again I was wondering about this story, hoping you'd continue it. There hasn't been a lot to read these days. Nicely done chapter though I noticed you changed tenses from the last two. I liked your take on Asha. You made her a lot stronger than the show lets her be and I think it was a good thing. As always your skill shows through and you packed a lot of emotion into a small space. Looking forward to reading more.) |
| Black Angel 2/12/02 . chapter 3 i really like your story, please post the next chapter sooner, this one took too long! |
| Sydpanball22 not signed in 2/12/02 . chapter 3 wow... your story is jus great...
its so poetic... it flows really really well...
the emotions are just really intense and... well... i just like ur story a wole whole bunch!
i swear... once get over how great the style and rhythm of ur writing is maybe ill be abe to start thinkin bout the plot. lol...
sydney |
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