 crazylelenumber1 2009-12-14 . chapter 10AW! Cute ending! I really enjoyed this story. It was interesting from the very start. I love how Sasuke was clueless but not at the same time. I also love how all the people from Konohana end up being the people that find Sasuke in the end. Ya gotta love Shika. Yay for insane!Itachi, he really is a lot of fun. I liked how you did him, he was very convinced right to the end that he was doing the right thing for Sasuke. Kinda like in the Manga (though not really). Thank you for all the lovely fluff! Though Sasuke didn't brood as much. Or give the 'Uchiha death glare' as much as he would have if he had his memory. *rubs chin* I think I'm done...
Peace!
~Crazylele1 |
 moopad 2009-11-02 . chapter 10(~Ah) Isn't that so adorable??
Really awesome fic
ThanX |
 Thunder Gardian 2009-11-01 . chapter 10Aw! Sweet! I definately have all the traits of a love story!
Love it! NaruSasu rocks!
I loved Sasuke, he acted so cute sometimes! |
 MadaMag 2009-10-29 . chapter 10Yup. AU, but nice story.
I wonder, didn't Itachi go after Sasuke again? Or the duo stopped him? |
 5Angel 2009-10-29 . chapter 10Bwah! You couldn't possibly get any more Naruto than to misread those signs. I like Sasuke's determination - to even defy the need for oxygen for a taste of Dobe lips LOL
They are both utterly pathetic and purrfect for each other LOL Bless their cotton socks :)
Love 'em! Thank you ... :) |
 FallingForNobody 2009-10-28 . chapter 10That was a GREAT ending! <3 I loved this. <3 thank you SO much for updating so quickly by the way. <33
The ending was so sweet/cute! ^^ great great story. :) |
 Alley-Oop 2009-10-28 . chapter 10Chapter nine could have used another read-through, and I was slightly disappointed that chapter ten was, essentially, about sex. I don't have an issue with it, but I was enjoying the presence of an actual plot without implied smut.
I suppose that's okay, though.
Good story. ^^; |
 Alley-Oop 2009-10-28 . chapter 7Somehow, I cannot see Sasuke saying the word "bonked" seriously... Or at all, for that matter.
But, other than that, it was a good chapter, although I'm really just working on catching up right now. :P Somehow, I feel behind. If it were possible for one to update too much, I'd be wary, if I were you. (But I don't think it is, so it's irrelevant either way.) |
 Akira Nishikawa 2009-10-28 . chapter 10^^ this is the perfect end for this story...so good XDD
Thanks for share this
XOXO
Akira |
 Koolneko22 2009-10-28 . chapter 10Wow.
Hilarious way to end. I loved it.
Poor Sasuke. He had it worse I think.
Keep up the good work! |
 Akira Nishikawa 2009-10-28 . chapter 9YAY! problems and angst but all light I like that. such a good story, will be one of my favorites XD
Waiting for the epilogue ...
XOXO
Akira |
 5Angel 2009-10-28 . chapter 9LOL, after all that build up you pulled it together in the least messy most efficient way LOL
You mentioned jinchuriiki without any prior reference.
Naruto and his sense of humour he, glee, glomp LOL can't wait for the epilogue, each time I read anything from you ... after frustration wondering what's coming next and a whole lot of pain...you always leave me with a gleeful smile, thank you.
I wish Sasuke had beat up on Tachi but then I'm glad he didn't because he's obviously a better person LOL
Can't wait for the epi but puhhlleease bring out the SasuNaru's after okay? LOL
Heck, whatever, if you write it, I will read it - I even tried your German fic but the online translation sites I tried completely scrambled it so I gave up LOL
:) |
 Azh Hikari 2009-10-27 . chapter 9*sigh* thank god it's not the last chapter yet, because I really don't want this story to end.
Straight with a splash of Sasuke is quite short for my taste, so please give us MANY more chapter of this story ^^.
thank you. |
 Clow Angel 2009-10-27 . chapter 9Aww... Only an epilogue left? I always feel somewhat down when a good story's come to an end. Thanks for having written this. ^^ It was awesome even with all the vagueness and holes. Like... what the hell is a Jinchuuriki in this fic? o.o; What's gonna happen to Sasuke's company? And uh, will Itachi be thrown into the loony house? xD Okay, so that last one isn't a hole at all, but my random questioning. And it's random because I can't type straight nor can I seem to think straight. Sleepy... |
 roses-have-thorns911 2009-10-27 . chapter 9AWE!! Will the epilogue be a whole other story, or just another chapter a bit in the future to show how things turned out for them? either way I can't wait! Update soon! :) |