nice, keep it up!

That was so cute! I loved it so very much!

~KWF~

Now, I love this! Great job! Ayako-san seeing a side of Miyagi that barely a few people notice - his good side. I can almost feel what Ayako-san's feelings.

Personally, I'd love it if Haruko ends up with Yohei. I don't know. The pair seems to settle well with me. ^_^ Ok, I'm babbling. Hope to read more from you soon!