|Reviews for Stargate: Return of the Ancients, Season 1, Ep 13|
| general-joseph-dickson 10/21/09 . chapter 2
Ah. Stupid humans don't even move to save their own planet.
| aspeo 10/21/09 . chapter 2
Interesting chapter. It seems like the Atlantis gang is getting put back together. I liked how it took three tries to get Novak beamed up. It was pretty funny lol I can't wait to see what happens with the Asurans attacking earth!
I'll be looking forward to the next one!
| sh777 10/21/09 . chapter 2
The plot thickens with such a wonderful cliff hanger. Thank you so much. ;)
| SuperN-Gaspard 10/21/09 . chapter 2
Well, this is good. I'm looking forward to what happens next.
| tpx1 10/21/09 . chapter 2
please update soon!
| Zealoto 10/21/09 . chapter 1
Great story, I like it very much.
It is very interesting how you bring old, suspended characters back into the mix, keep it up.
My only concern is that Stevenson might become too successful, there are many stories that lose their appeal where the main character slowly makes his enemies into friends, sometimes even during wars, or how he makes peace with those who betrayed him, where noone dies, etc...
I just hope that you will include some serious setbacks for Stevenson, not just losing a minor battle or not being able to build something on time, but more permanent, like some people dying, etc. For example, while I know that SG1 are major characters and many would like to see them on Stevensons side, it would make the story more "realistic", if some of them would not find their way to him, like Carter or Teal'c. At the moment it seems that you are slowly changing their way of thinking, so that they join the Alterra after some confusion on their part, I hope that some of them remain on the opposite side.
If you want to get a better idea what I mean, read Earl of the North, a HP fanfic. There Harry gets thrown into Azkaban and after gaining superpowers and becoming kinda king of the world, all the people who betrayed him are slowly forgiven, he is joined by Bellatrix and other former DEs and so on ans so on. There is one moment especially, after which I stopped reading the story. There Hermione tried to portkey to a protected property, after which she should be knocked out and dumped into the ocean. She was not expected, she was a traitor to Harry and ahe tried to invade the island of extremely warlike people, who always kill their enemies, yet she was rescued by them and after beeing thrown into a cell she was approached by Bella of all people with the promise to help her earn Harry's forgiveness...
While your story is not even nearly so bad, I have the feeling that you should include some character death to make the story more realistic...
| allygator16666 10/19/09 . chapter 1
Great to see the next episode up. The Aschen...even though they were only in a few episodes...I thought they were one of the most heinous villains ever with their manipulative scheme to annihilate the human race through sterilization. I hope Stevenson kicks their asses! I hope we're going to see more Mackay and other Atlantis friends soon! Update fast! This story is addictive!
| Cam 10/19/09 . chapter 1
Wow i love this story! Its so cool how you effortlessly bring back old characters and even races without the tacky little excuses that tptb use... It should be interesting to see if earth can defend against the aschen themselves, What with them only having the tsun szu now. I cant wait to read some more chapters i hope that bratac has to save earth and that should scare them to see just how far the new system lords have come. Finally the IOA might get some well deserved time with their tail between their legs
| tpx1 10/19/09 . chapter 1
nice new episode!
The Aschen are back! Will they be defeated by Stevenson or by the Ancient-Jaffas?
please update soon!
| aspeo 10/19/09 . chapter 1
This should be interesting! I guess we will get to see just how powerful that new ship is huh? I wonder who the 7 people are that are supposed to be brought back. I can guess at some, but I will be looking forward to seeing who all it will be.
Good chapter and good start to this episode! I will looking forward to the next one!
| sh777 10/19/09 . chapter 1
The aschen will make things interesting. I have enjoyed all of these stories you are writing.
| Hallowed are the Ancients 10/18/09 . chapter 1
Wonder who they're going to go pick up. Rodney, perhaps? And myabe a few other Atlantis personnell? I doubt Sam or Jack would come along, they stil l have a lot of work to do on Earth...intersting. Glad you used the Aschen, they would have made an interesting enemy if TPTB had actually developed them.
| MP116 10/18/09 . chapter 1
oh oh oh oh oh man Carter picked a crappy time to lose Earth's ships.
| general-joseph-dickson 10/18/09 . chapter 1
The Ashen huh. Thought they were extinct. Guess they were smarter than they look.
| SuperN-Gaspard 10/18/09 . chapter 1
Thank you for updating the series again.
Interesting...the Aschen, many things are starting to happen again. Just encase you didn't know an Aschen ship looks like or really similar to the enemy ship in "SG1: Grace"
stargate . wikia wiki/Ship_%28Grace%29