If anyone has the story "Ice and the Devil" by this author could they e-mail it to me? I would really appreciate it!!

I've tried emailing you, but it doesn't seem to work... I'm a really big fan of the Family Sagas, but I noticed a while back that you're missing some of your stories on I really wanted to read the one about Miles again...when he's sent away. Just wondering if you could either send it to me or give me another link. Thanks.

- Miriya

Alright, I've loved this story for so long and I haven't reviewed. How awful of me. But, never mind that... because I'm going to do that now. ^^

First off, this is definitely your best story. The character development is just stunning. I used to dislike Veronica from what I saw of her one-dimensional existence in other fanfics, but this made her my favorite character. I feel so badly for her, because it does seem that Randy is perfect in every way. And, I do agree that Randy really does get away with everything.

What I really liked about this story was how everything fit. This could partially be attributed to Hidden, but even if Hidden hadn't existed the references were enough. You gave Veronica tons of motivation for what she did, and I could almost imagine having the same reaction that she did.

Sorry to reply to another review, but I saw an earlier one that said that the kids were just mediocre copies of their parents. There are many things that critics could address with this fanfic, but... that is not one of them, IMO. If anyone disagrees... feel free to picture Relena singing "You're makin' me high." ;) I find that the kids have MUCH more development than their parents did in Gundam Wing.

Sorry, had to get that one out of my system. Anyway, I also saw an earlier review stating that Donovon and Randy's relationship seems to be going downhill. I actually sort of agree; Donovan really had no right to forbid Vaughn to see Randy. I'd really like them to patch up their relationship sometime... and while I'm on the subject: Poor Victoria! I'd love to find out about Chris' partner and what exactly happened... and, of course, it'd be great to see them work things out too.

Vaughn and Veronica definitely are my favorite couple, because you made them become that. They're not the cutest (Jet and Is, aww!) or even the angiest (Jonathon and Leigh take the prize for that, I think) but this story makes them, IMO, the best. There's just something so endearing about how they got together.

Anyway, I wish that I could gush more... but I've gotta run. Please keep writing more of these ^_^

Eek! This was a great ending! I absolutely LOVE this story! Your Gundam Wing stories are the best! And the plots are always so interesting! Randy and Vaughn are so hilarious! And so are Donovan and Veronica!

Happy Toodles,
Stacey-chan

Very, very well done. Each chapter left me anticipating the next. Keep up the good work.

You took long enough, but it was worth the wait. that was a tad short, but beautiful. Yay! Happy Tasha!

mwah

GOOD STUFF! I was enthralled with this whole book and am looking forward to more of your writings like this!!!

~Aeryka

Absolutely magnificent update! Will this be the last chapter? Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story! Happy New Year!

An end to a great story! I enjoyed reading this fic as well as many others did! I hope to read more of your great works soon! Till the next fic, catch ya later!

~~WPY

I guess you resolved Vaughn and Veronica's situations cleanly enough, but after reading that chapter it's hard to understand why Donovan and Randy are still together. Donovan is treating her pretty badly and the trust does not seem to be all there and Randy, I don't even know what to think of her anymore.

You had some really nice characters and so many of the earlier stories were really great. But these stories are becoming pathetic daytime television. The 2nd generation consists of multiple mediocre copies of their parents and it has really started to show. I hope you're happy with people telling you "Good story" and other 2 line reviews and I won't be offended if you delete this review. I only hope your novel is better than this. Given how good your earlier work was, that is a distinct possibility.

I apologize for not leaving an e-mail, but my e-mail is through my job and has both my full first and last name in it, and that is not something I feel comfortable posting in such an open forum.

Good luck to you.

i loved this story sooooo much! :)
great job writing it
i hoping there may be more?

Thank you, God!!! I have been waiting for this chapter for so long! A yr. actually. Can you believe that?! Thank you, thank you! This was wonderful as always, and I hope you have an epilogue chapter dealie! more soon on all of your fics! ~the ever faithful, Ami :)

so good!!!! as always....is it finished? or is there more? oh well it was so good and i hope u finish ur other stories too!

Yea! An update! I enjoyed this immensely. Trust Heero to be a stubborn father to the end! Excellent read as always!

Yea! An update! I enjoyed this immensely. Trust Heero to be a stubborn father to the end! Excellent read as always!