This is how I always wanted Edward to feel about leaving the Bebop, because that's how I felt when she left.

I'm digging this. I love the emotion and the writing (though, I am a huge fan of this kind of writing in particular). You captured the tone very well as well as the characters. I'm impressed and will definitely check out your other works.

Cheers

Woah...That was so DAMN SWEET and SAD and just SO DAMNED PAINFUL(ahopefulpain) and I have run out of words to describe this story except that this is one of the best drabbles that I have read in my life. ^

You have done a GREAT job at this drabble!Not that you don't normally, but its just that this one's outstanding!XP XD XD

This is kind of painfully sad. I loved it. It captures the end perfectly - the nostalgia and the knowledge that nothing remains the same. It's painfully wonderful.

~ Tuppence ~