I don't know what to say. Just. Akihiko/Mitsuru is always a good thing, and you've gotten them both down so well, and your writing - and, yeah. This was fantastic. Great job. :]

Two words: HOLY F*.

This was very beautifully written, and I, like Lady Cheshire, simply loved that line about Shinji being in the earth and air, and Miki in fire. You portrayed Akihiko and Mitsuru's complicated relationship perfectly and I like the bittersweet theme you had, just before the happy ending. It really stirred something in me, lol.

It's my birthday today so this is an awesome, awesome treat. ^_^ Great job!

I really like this. It's short, but there's a lot of meaning in the small amount of words that are used. And it really highlights just how many people Akihiko's lost. I enjoy his relationship with Mitsuru and you've portrayed it quite nicely here.

You are like my favorite author and I CAN'T believe you wrote an akimitsu fic ::D ! kldsafkl;jsdklfjsdl;akfjaskljf ;I LOVE this couple (and the fanfics are so rare T_T) and you did a fabulous job (as always). Thank you, THANK YOU for writing this :D

If you ever feel like writing this again, oh geez, I would be so happy XD

THANK YOU again :DD

This is simply marvelous, a lovely cariacture of both Mitsuru and Akihiko. The pace of this reminds me of dancing, where Akihiko isn't quite in step with Mitsuru but she doesn't mind (she seems to like it).

Particularly beautiful: His brother rests in earth and air. His sister lies in fire.

Good work here, I'm so glad you've continued writing persona fics!

Small crit: “Do I have you attention?” (should be your, I believe)

Thanks. :)

AH!

I don't even know this that well but i've fallen head over heels for them. You know I like these kinds of the couples the most.