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54Viruses
2009-10-20 . chapter 1
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Nice, very nice. XD

In my defense, my damsel in distress was found by SPLINTER! And she did not develope and unreasonable crush on him!
Fantasyfan4ever
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
XD Brillant concept for an oneshot! You did a wonderful job with the interaction of the brothers, and the teasing is the best part of the entire fic. Man, it goes to show that even though they are mutated turtles skilled in the art of ninjutsu(sp?), they still act like typical teenage boys. Poor Raph; he actually makes a good point. I think the others don't bother to rescue guys because they prefer ladies. ;) Well done!
Kyaserin Marii
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
Ha! "Big Ol' Raph has saved a dude! Whoop-de-frickin'-do!" One of the best lines!

Thanks for the laugh...I needed it! :)
Mikell
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
Ok if laughing at an already-ticked-off Raphael wasn't so dangerous to one's health, I'd be literally falling off my chair. I didn't suspect until about 3/4 of the way through the story what was going on. LMBO Funny stuff!! I love it. Poor Raph. heheh

And that "talk" with Mikey... *snorts* Poor Mike. heh

Well done. Bravo!

Rejoicing in the day,
-Mary
AlyssaFelixa
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
Hehehe...
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