 QueenOfHearts3 2009-11-17 . chapter 1hi! long time, no see :D read whats going on at your profile page here, and i hear ya. it sux big time. finding good sites to host your stuff is... a nightmare. and youre right, mental as this place has become lately, its still less of a hassle to post here than most other places. i just wish i had the motivation to deal with it myself... *gets butterflies just thinking the dust her stories are collecting by now* how do you manage? XD
anyway, awesome to see, what i assume to be, a re-telling of one my faves. ive seen people attempt it before, but it always turned out so cliche, it was really kinda sad lol but since its you, i dont think we'll hafta worry about that :D KC's a hoot. i totally understand her frustration about her height. im even 2 inches shorter, with no hope of ever growing, given that im one of the tallest in my family (sad, i know). ill say that the other development issue is no fun on the opposite side tho... ugh. anyway, i like her sense of humor. Kimiko's fun too. Brady, on the other hand... yikes. she wont be appearing much, will she? anyway, ill read more later. must get off the pc now ^_^ good luck |
 starkitty 2009-11-07 . chapter 5 This is great! I'm exceedingly happy that you're posting for this story again. I was really bummed when you stopped writing for it, because there aren't very many original character stories that do the romance genre justice and you had left it at that point where my curiosity was just eating at me.
I love all the changes you've made. I noticed that you really took a lot of extra care with all the details, especially with the scenery, which made the experience all the more vivid. It has become very realistic and KC has so much of a presence in the story that it's easy to see that you're writing skill has grown.
Thank you so much for posting it. I'm sure you can tell by my review that Legend has been a pleasure to read. I can't wait to see what happens next! |