 May Eve 2010-01-03 . chapter 1Aww, this is cute. Love the pairing and your writing is nice and smooth. Well done. ^^ |
 BiccaBoo 2009-12-29 . chapter 1Awe, i love this. I've read it about 4 times and it keeps getting better each time. I really liked the idea of holding hands infront of the elders and Kirk not realising why they were looking at him oddly. Great idea and story. Well done! |
 KaiPheonix 2009-11-09 . chapter 1Just loved the holding hands in front of the Elders part. That and the accidental courtship entry.
*grins* Sometimes the best things in our lives happen unplanned and on accident.
-Kai |
 lyricoloratura 2009-10-25 . chapter 1This was just plain lovely, from start to finish. Characterizations were excellent, the relationships were sweetly done, and everything was just really well-written.
"Not that he and Spock hadn’t already. Har har."
Couldn't exactly tell you why that particular line cracked me up -- but it did! ;-)
Thanks for a super read! |
 KalaKitsune 2009-10-21 . chapter 1 Cute! |
 Dilmn8 2009-10-19 . chapter 1this was so cute :) i loved it, good job! :D
p.s. i loved the 'logical band aid' that was hilarious |
 MirrorFlower and DarkWind 2009-10-19 . chapter 1i just melted into a puddle of goo lol great job i loved it! |
 ecsuss 2009-10-19 . chapter 1that was just lovely, thank you |
 plasticblue 2009-10-19 . chapter 1aww too cute. loves |
 Dana Katherine 2009-10-19 . chapter 1Aw, how sweet! That's funny, Spock and Jim walking around New Vulcan making out! lol Great job! |