This story is SO good! I'm gonna be sad to see it go.

AW! <3 I love the Rory/Jess pairing it was the one I was rooting for! :D Oh and um where does the Swan Song come into this? He hasn't mentioned anything about a swan...has he? Oh well I'm being stupid. Anyway I'm really glad you updated so soon after I had commented. I hope the next update comes out soon but alas*sniffles* it is the last one. T~T I can't wait though for it.
KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!
~LoTuS

good chapter & more please

This story is just...wonderfully written. I'm fell in love with it after the first paragraph. Please don't stop writing until you get to the end. I'll be awaiting eagerly.
~LoTuS
:3

Nice job! I really enjoy this story, keep it up!

good chapter & more please

Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Oh look at that, Jess finally opened up! Waiting to see how this goes now, what Luke's going to do about it and if he's ever going to find out what Jess's pre-SH life was like. You've got Jess's loneliness down pat, makes you feel for the poor kid...great work!

good chapter & more please

Good chapter!
I'm so happy Jess finally admitted what had happened to him to Luke. And I totally don't mind that this story is leaning more towards a Jess and Luke centric, because those are my favorites (hence why I write them.)
I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

I actually prefer Jess/Luke story over literati so that doesn't bother me. Great chapter. I can't wait for more

It was definitely not cheesy! It was just the right amount of drama, considering the subject. I'm happy with the focus on Luke and Jess, though I do hope there will be more Rory. I loved this chapter, I really loved Jess' interaction with Lorelai and his call to Liz.

please update son! xD

Oh God, thanks for posting, dude! Lov this! xD

He needs to break down and let someone help him. Poor Jess, and poor Rory!