 LiebesengelKarin 2009-11-08 . chapter 1*tipps her lipps*
..ok, first think.. "Befreien" just sounds plain wrong.. Right now, I am not shure which word would be more fitting, or sentence.. I really have to think over it..
Oh, but the other one is Simple.. Not "Sterben!" but "Stirb!"
..that would be like saying "Dieing", ya know~
Oh, I am a german, so you can trust me on that^^
(thats why my english sucks probably *tehehe*)
On Sidenote.. I think the Get Backers Humor was.. not badly done~ |