beautifully written and terribly dark. this is just the way i would imagine jenova to be.

Beautiful musc. my heart "hates" it as much as my brain find it well though, well sung, perfetly written.

But tell, *ephatizing point when are you goig to write Aeriseph? O_O Juste once? Pwease? I bet it should sing wonderfully, don't you?

Thanks for the music.

Creepy and wonderful. I'm glad my sister got me curious.

Absolutely brilliant. So chillingly haunting...

Wow... That was weird... and the weird thing is that it that it's all so true... I really liked the end, how Cloud sees everything wrong and all. That was amazing...

This is amazing! I love this so much! You really got the imagery and the descriptive work to a perfect T!

Woh, this is deep. Your good, your really good...

Magnificent.I'm gaping in awe, that was terrific. My guesses would be Scarlet's, and since they've been guessed, Wa la! I love Bjork! I maintain the terrificness of this Fic, WOW.

Oh, *lovely*. Excellent imagery and pacing, good rhythm.

*Very* nice. Buono lavoro. I loved the musical terms, as a musician.

Whoa... that was really amazing. Deep and just wow. I really liked the way that you described each character. The way Jenova controls them. The title is really amazing, very original. This will definatly be going on my favorites list. Really amazing.

Musical chairs and Ring-Around-the-Rosie? (And I can also tell you where the latter game originated!
And, very nicely done. So morbid. I like. -

I like the metaphor of a dance and the Italian musical words. The beat is quick and eerie. The topic is something I have considered on many a quiet night and you vignette moves with the rhythm of a poem. (one of the games if Ring-Around-the- Rosy) Thank you for something so deep.

...woah...that's...deep...disturbing...full of a strangely muted, psychological chill...Wow, Koi. That's great! I've been waiting for another one of your vignettes, and now that its here, I'm reminded again of how well you write, and the other vignettes (partcularly Vincent's and Seph...Sephi...Sephir...Gah! Sephy's) tie in to this one...heh heh, kinda like a puppet's strings to the puppetmaster...