They are so cute

Just found the story and I can not wait to read more...

WOW! what a twist and i can't wait to read more

amazing and awesome and i'm so loving it

WOW! intense and amazing
i love it

I hope you're doing OK Jackie. This whole situation sucks like sour grapes.

That said though, I love Josh. He's such a sweetie and so innocent it makes me chuckle. The whole DS getting "blowed" up was too funny, because I can imagine him saying it.

Janet? Ugh, she needs to go die in a pit somewhere. She makes my skin crawl. That's not your fault though.

I liked it a lot. Hang in there girl.

xoxo

great chapter!

Jackie--this is a great story. I had trouble accessing it when you first posted, but now no problem. So I read it all. I love it all. Keep writing--you are very talented!

Calm down, tiger. I'm sure all of us knew you didn't "steal" that idea. You're too good of a writer to do that. :)

Anyway, I must say, I rolled my eyes when Janet walked in. She irritates me both on and off screen, apparently. LMAO @ Carly's "Oh my god, it's a freaking convention." Haha. Right on point.

Great job. I'm glad Jack's okay *phew*. (I would totally write more, but I think I'm coming down with a sinus cold/infection too, just know that I loved this chapter okay?) Happy Thanksgiving girl! xoxoxo

Allie

great chapter! please don't let janet/craig get their hands on another kid.

Jp, I would never have though that Nicole was Janet sister, but what I really like to know who has Joshua? Good story I'm enjoying and as always can;t wait for chapter 4 keep it up JP

Another Great Chapter. I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh my god. No. No no no no no no no no no...

You're lucky I trust you so damn much, you know that right? I know you won't kill Jack...but still. This is NOT good. Not good not good not good.

The writing is AMAZING. You should seriously become an author. I'd buy 100 copies of your book. You got skills, girl. Mad skills.

Love ya, feel better. xo

Allie

Please let Jack be okay :/

Hello you :)
Can we get an update soon? Please? :-D