| Reviews for Temptation |
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SakuraKoi 2/15/13 . chapter 1So good please do another chapter or do a sequel for this story! |
ichigoxryou2 9/26/12 . chapter 1Hahahaha! This is great! I would love if it was longer but it's awesome! You do such a magnificent job in descriptions! |
littlexiao 6/8/12 . chapter 1omg i could actually feel it the temptation about killing |
thegirlinthewindow 3/16/12 . chapter 1The ending was hilarious! You should continue this, and maybe have Feng Lan accidentally turn in a paper that has what she said to Lolidragon on it. |
Whiiney 3/15/12 . chapter 1hahaha Its great, but makes me wonder if prince will finish his homework. I hope you write a 2nd chapter |
Nekoi Kurona 2/28/12 . chapter 1LOL how like Xiao Lan to describe something so bloodily and not get why Lolidragon would run away |
Aurelia Roschelle 10/13/11 . chapter 1Omg haha this is awesome! The way you describe them describing temptation... Sigh. /smiles Perfect :D Good job! |
Laura-Ella 5/15/11 . chapter 1Great chapter, update soon! |
KonekoRei 3/16/11 . chapter 1This was a great fic :). So stop apologizing damnit! You shouldn't give a damn whether others like it or not Because it's yours! I repeat this fanfic was amazing, I read it all the way through and it takes a lot for me to do that so chin up! Your fan -GhostKitten |
ScornedxRose 6/14/10 . chapter 1hahah...wow I'm wondering if Xiao Lan was a sociopath in another life...lol haha...poor Lolidragon, she couldn't withstand the very explicit description of Prince's enjoyment for killing. Loved this one-shot! |
One percent 5/10/10 . chapter 1actually, I would have imagined the end being the reaction of the classroom instead xD but it was a fun read nevertheless, not to mention that you have a beautiful way with words :) |
AsianTwinkiesFTW 3/19/10 . chapter 1BAHAHAHAHAHAHAA LOLL. 3 |
kaori kuni 2/11/10 . chapter 1Heya. Nice to see people add more fanfictions for this fandom (we should have our own category, rather than sharing it with other manhua/chinese stuff .), last time I checked there were so few... Back to the topic, this was very funny and I enjoyed a lot reading this. At first I thought she had stucked her tongue on Gui, and I was preparing myself for some eternal laugh, guess that was not my fate. Well, that's nice because how would I go to school if I'm laughting for eternity. I loved Gui's short, but unique participation. Kyah. I'm in love with him. . Guess Lolidragon got traumatized by Lan's goryness. Such a unique girl Lan is , enjoying bloodbaths and human slicing. This felt in character, as I remember that part from the tournament arc when Prince listed all his torture and killing methods. Geez, I even wrote them down for future reference. Well, thank you for this nice addition. . I'm saving this in my favourites, so in the future I can have another look at this. And before I forget, I would like to visit that forum you were talking about, seems interesting. So, take care and cheers, Kaori |
jasmin flower 1/21/10 . chapter 1Lawlz! Kind of reminded me of the one competition! That was good! Would have been good to see the look on Gui's face after, though! Haha! Very nice! |
wiiTneSs 12/6/09 . chapter 1lol great one prince...err maybe I shouldn't laugh. |