I liked this. It was pretty good, and I would love for Penelope to give Liz an ultimatum, say "Either you do this, or I'll make sure that your coffin has a body in it. Preferably yours."

I think that would be vicious and totally Penelope... she scares me...

this is really quite interesting! i was hoping somone would re-write this part. I too, felt as though this part in the actual book needed to be extended! good job, and looking forward to reading thr next chapter.. :)