good,i dont get the bombs or rafes

I was started to get bored, besides,what's up with the left-roght-right-right thing?

Hey, good job. I can see the images; it isn't boring me; and you describe everything well! I wasn't bored. Nothing was hurried, but some of the battle scenes were a little dragged out. The new bomb ideas were pretty cool too!

Again, your skill at writing lights up this fanfiction collection! I have only one suggestion: send this to as many Zelda sites as you can!

Great story, as the others, I hope you do write more, it was very well writin! )