 jen3572005 2009-10-27 . chapter 1Thanks for that. I really enjoyed the story. i agree with most of your reviews and would definatly welcome a sequal. I would like to give an alternative approach though. Instead of harry being the enforcer of the relationship, I always found the stories where severus is the driving force between the couple more appealing. Say maybe they keep getting together on a casual basis until snape becomes used to the arangment and must woo harry over to his way of thinking slytherin style.:L
Of coarse you havent even said weither you would do a sequal so most of our suggestions are rather pointless but please bare them in mind for your next story. Anyway loved it and you did a great job.
Jen3572005 |
 Kievan Rus' Supernova 2009-10-26 . chapter 1Adorable. Wish there was more though. I want to know if they stay together ot not.
Alex |
 IkashaRashel 2009-10-20 . chapter 1I think you should make this a multi-chapter story. This is the first time i've seen this HP/SS meeting done and it is very interesting. like after their, umm, session, harry could be all like I dont want just sex you know and they could live and be friends and more...and then tell all harry's living friends and live happily ever after! yeah...that'd be great...^.^ |
 darkwish3 2009-10-20 . chapter 1 :D i like yours better than JKRs ending |
 Y-dO-u-CrY 2009-10-20 . chapter 1aw how u could u stop there *jaw drops* update ASAP! |
 Bonomania 2009-10-20 . chapter 1Oh my! Good times. I love this. :] |