adsfbhdabsncmsa,€! WHY WHY WHY?! I have class tomorrow at six why am I staying up late reading this? YOu suck for writing a story I can just not stop in the midldle of! But, not really.

Also, my favorite part? Z going:
"/He. Told./
/B. To./
/Start. Anyway./"
It;'s like the saddest thing I've ever seen and just thingking of it makes me want to start crying. OMG it's so haeeart breaking!

aND And, I reallyu do apologize for all the mistakes in this review, but it's dark, UI'm tired, and I don't feal feel like looking this over or using spellcheck or my backspace key, ever though this awesome story desreves an awesome reiview, because it's, you know, awesome (DoRD), I just can't provide that because one, I'm a dork, and two, this awesome blew my mind and it doesn't klook to be coming back.

Love
~J

This story kept me guessing from beginning to end...except the ending, I say that coming, but I'm extremely glad it ended in a happy manner. Great story!

I really enjoyed this. I read it practically in one go, though it was really long- you could have split it into several chapters^^.
I almost figured the "Dimwit" Dorian would end up dead, since it was really for the best. I do feel sorry for him, though, for all he has endured, and then not being able to reunite with his love... I'm glad it all ended well, though. The whole idea was great, how do you always come up with such interesting storylines?