You've really got the characters down pat on this - every single line was utterly perfect and I could completely believe each of them saying it. However, I feel like a little more description could really add to this - just to balance out your phenomenal dialogue. Anyway, great work!

Very funny - you captured Gordon's total head!desk quality in a very few words, & I could hear L:aura's wry bemusement at him, as ever.

Really cute :) Love Laura and Mr Brittas!